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Wednesday, August 7, 2019

Preswasve writing

I did a preswasive writing to Mr N. Do you think he wil say Yes?

7 comments:

  1. Hi Storm, I really liked how you were really specific about your reasons and your explanations were related to what you were talking about. Next time I think you should you should add more information so I could get more hooked into bringing Chromebooks to home.

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    1. Hi Fria
      I really tryed but i think Mr normen will get hooked:)

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  2. hi STORM GOOD IDEA MAY BE ADD MORE information spell CHECK

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    1. Thanks for letting me know Calos,
      I will check me spelling Soon or later!

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  3. Hi Storm. I really liked how you added a lot of explaining into your wiritng. I have a question. What if we have finished our work and we still brought our chromebooks home what would we need to do with it?
    Also what if we drop our chromebook while we are taking it home?
    One more question. What if we don't have a case for our Chromebooks?
    Anyways great post.
    Talia

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    1. Hi Talia
      You would go an youtube or any game you think but bot shotting.
      If you drop it You have to buy your own crome book?
      IF you dont have a case you can leave it in school
      Thanks Taila

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  4. Hello Storm! I really like how your reasons were explained really well and how you added a question at the start to hook the reader. Maybe next time you could work on saying why you don't want to stay in the class room at break times and finish your work, and maybe you could write more reasons if you can!

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