Ke ora Humans. I made a vidieo on biteable. I made it about how to make a pully. Enjoy!
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, August 29, 2019
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Hi Storm,
ReplyDeleteI am Angel your sister.
I really like how you presented your pully with a anaimation.
Love Angel
Hi Angel.
DeleteThank you for saying the positve.
I can't awnser any Qustons.
Bye!
Hi Storm, It's Kylie here. I really liked how you added a lot of detail so people can understand what your teaching them and your instructions were really clear as well. This DLO made me think about me making a pully using your instructions which are Amazing! Next time I think you should check your description for your blog post cause I don't think it's really appropriate to say "Kia Ora Humans" even though we are Humans. You could start it with "Kia Ora Community" and that's like saying everyone in the whole World cause everyone in the whole World can see you Blog. But that's just a tip. But over all your DLO was really good!
ReplyDeleteHi Kylie.
DeleteThank you for noticeing my blog post.I was 7 when I did it.I'll cahnge it soon!What dose DLO mean?