On friday Room 1,2,3 Went to a trip on a bus to go to town. I was exited. When we where at town, we went to the new lidary. It was callled Turanga libary. We ate our moring tea in the meeting room. We were spilt up in three groups. Frist we went to the frist floor. There was a lego place and diffrent laguges from book. Then on the sencend floor it was the place where altuts work. ON the trid floor it was about nonfichon place. When my group was there nowone was there!. On the tippy top there was a place where anyone can look down and it was sooooooooo high!. I went back towards the wall. Then the libarin said ‘’ Its fine some people don't like carrots and some people don’t like hights So when we went inside and there is still Lots of high places. so i just sat on the armchair. After the tour we went to a five minite walk to the NZSO. When we where there we had to clime stars to get to the room. When we where close to the room I saw Liam at the bench with Ammada. When i was in the room the room was noysie but they played the harry potter music and the star wars. I like the harry potter the most because it wasen't that nousie. After the NZSO was finishd I was talking with miss greer.when We where outside the room we went back on the bus to have lunch in school.
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Tuesday, July 2, 2019
The awsome trip
Today i was writing about a trip that i went with my class, we saw lots of things! wanna know read the story below! The trip
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Hi Storm its Xavier,
ReplyDeleteI like your work because it had loooots of detail.
I like how you described all the things room 1,2,and 3 did.
just fix up your words you spelled were rong.
did you like the Star Wars music?
by Xavier
Hi Storm
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in when you were talking with Keysha
L lent how you put in you were talking with Miss Geer
Can you put in moer about the turanaga libray
from Francis
Thanks for the feedback francis!!!!!!!!
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