In the holidays i went to Casles hill. I went with my Family and my frinds family HIs sisters is, Abby, Rohna, riea. My brother thoght it was a theres a real casle in casle hill. But then when we got there my brothter was disapontied becuse there was just stone there. So while we where waliking i runed to my frinds sister And walked with them, But then the other sisters saw me. Then the other sisthers said ‘’ come walk with me. ‘’ no walk WITH me!!’’. Then they contindued fighting. So while they where fighting Me Angel BJ and one of the sisters Run Near the HUGE rocks so we won’t here the fighting. But then when we where at the huge rocks we saw some people in ownsies. One of the said ‘’wach out theres a LION’’. But there wasen’t a real lion it was just one stuped guy in a lion ownsis. But i lahfed starcataly. So i just asked a question, ‘’ why are you in ownsis’’. Beccuse its warm, Its cold, we look funny. Then the list was keep on goning on and on. So we keep on walking up the hill. Then we went up the HUGE hill. Then we took some photos on the hill. BJ my frind was being soooo dramatic ANd saying ‘’IM GONNA DIE, SO HIGH, IM GONG TO FALLL TO MY DEATH’’. Then afther theb long photos Me and My Brother went exploring… But we were LOST!!. But we had a plan. Me and my brother went walking back to the car. When we where back i did a big sigh. So we waited unitil they went back to the parking lot. So after we went to have lunch we went to Akaroa. We went to the rocky beach and ate fish and chips and Ice-cream. I really liked wben we had some ice-cream. But when i got home I did not ate anythiing. I just took a shower and went to bed.
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, July 23, 2019
My epic hoilday
So in the hoildays i did somthing really really exeting. Wanna know? Read my epic story.
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hi storm
ReplyDeleteI like How you added full stops and capitil letters.
I also went to Cacle hill but not in the Holidays and I went to aceroa.
can you please add who you went with well i know you went with your brother but who else
from Roisin from St Bernadett's School
Hi storm i like How you add Detail.
ReplyDeletecan you please tell me more a but what you like about the trip please.
from jasmine
Hello Storm!
ReplyDeleteI like when you said that BJ you're friend said "I'M GOING TO DIE,SO HIGH,I"M GOING TO FALL TO MY DEATH" that part was a little funny for me.
I also learnt that your friend doesn't like high places like Castle hill and what did you eat in the trip?
Next time you could check your spelling?