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Wednesday, March 27, 2019

Pobble writing

This is a writing about a Musical world
This is my picture that i wrote about.

2 comments:

  1. nice work Storm I like how you added the picture with the electric Guitar and the fish.

    I like how you said the'wonderful music' and the 'relaxing' that's how I can feel the music.

    can you also make the right capitals thank you.

    you can do it storm yay.

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    1. Hi Izza
      It's Future Storm. I'm In room 4 Now
      So I am Really happy With your spelling,
      Need to work on your capital letters and full stops.
      STORM from 2020

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