This is a writing about a Musical world
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, March 27, 2019
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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nice work Storm I like how you added the picture with the electric Guitar and the fish.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said the'wonderful music' and the 'relaxing' that's how I can feel the music.
can you also make the right capitals thank you.
you can do it storm yay.
Hi Izza
DeleteIt's Future Storm. I'm In room 4 Now
So I am Really happy With your spelling,
Need to work on your capital letters and full stops.
STORM from 2020