I tryed to desrip about the playgrong in the book called "pefetet paper planes". i tryed to description what it look like what did the students did in there.
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Monday, March 25, 2019
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hi storm my name is Keysha in room 3 i'm from st Bernadette's school.
ReplyDelete1. I like that you put a lot of detail of the paper air planes in the playground.
2. you did a great job of talking about the paper air planes.
3. could you please tell us about the character's in the story.
you did a great job of doing the character description.
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hi storm,
ReplyDelete1. Nice job storm.
2.you did a great job but can you please describe mr tomson.
3. i like how you describe miss miki and josh.
4.relly well done i love it
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