Hi guys sorry I haven't been posting for awhile but here it is!
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, December 31, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Mōrena Storm! And Happy New Year! :)
ReplyDeleteI hope you had a wonderful Christmas and were able to spend lots of quality time with your family. I hope you're enjoying your summer holidays too! Have you done anything exciting so far?
What a great short story! I really like how you've started it with lots of wonderful adjectives - it really sets the scene for the reader and helps them picture what you're talking about. Well done! :) Do you enjoy doing creative writing like this?
I haven't read this particular David Walliams book - I'll have to check it out! Can you tell me a bit more about what it's about?
Have a wonderful day, Storm. Keep up the great blogging! :)
Mā te wā,
Mikey
Hi again Storm!
ReplyDeleteNice choice! I had learned so much from reading all the awesome posts about Jean and Amelia! Would you like to be a pilot one day? What would be some other people you would like to see on our money?
Blog later!
Gabe