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Wednesday, June 5, 2019

My Cinquain poem.

For writing i made a Cinquain poem. I had 5 lines with syllables.

3 comments:

  1. Hey there Storm it is Kurtis from room 6, I would just like to say great job on your poem I think it is amazing, keep up the great work. Next time i think you could make the text stand out a little more. I also like the way that you said "Lego hurts when you stand on it" that made me laugh. Keep up the great work.

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  2. Hello Storm it's Makayla from hornby pirmary school. I like the lego buildings It looks super cool! I like how you said lego hurts you when you step on it.you could put a full stop in after the word it.I hope you have a great day at school today. did you make those buildings

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  3. Hi Storm. I like the way you used the amazing words I really like you
    build the cool Lego you did a amazing job how mine days did you
    build the Lego?

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