For writing i made a Cinquain poem. I had 5 lines with syllables.
I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, June 5, 2019
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Hey there Storm it is Kurtis from room 6, I would just like to say great job on your poem I think it is amazing, keep up the great work. Next time i think you could make the text stand out a little more. I also like the way that you said "Lego hurts when you stand on it" that made me laugh. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHello Storm it's Makayla from hornby pirmary school. I like the lego buildings It looks super cool! I like how you said lego hurts you when you step on it.you could put a full stop in after the word it.I hope you have a great day at school today. did you make those buildings
ReplyDeleteHi Storm. I like the way you used the amazing words I really like you
ReplyDeletebuild the cool Lego you did a amazing job how mine days did you
build the Lego?