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Monday, May 6, 2019

What i did on the hoildays.

On the holidays i Went to 2 sleepovers because my mom was at my grandmas funeral in the philippines. 1 was at Brens house. We stayed there for 2 days. The other one was bella. We stayed there for more than 2 days. We went somewhere else. It was bridling beach. It was not like a beach because we could not swim in the water and there was no sand. It was rocks. We found emredels, and more!. When we been to BJs sleepover we had fun. We played rob the nest, ships, Simon says and more. Angel was recording on Youtube when we were at the 2 sleepovers. At bella's sleepover we watched a movie. It was called king kong. We had sugar donuts. After the sleepover we played with bella at margaret mahy. We had ice-cream. Angel had blueberry and me and bella had strawberry. My brother was in the car. My brother made the car batteries died because he left the engine on. Bella's dad had to do something with a big red and orange clips. While bella’s dad was doing that me and angel and bella was playing in the car. We pretend that we were going to pizza hut because in the there’s was a little menu about pizza hut. Angel wanted to order 200000000000 pepperoni pizzas and sprite. Bella wanted to order the same. When it was done we went to westfield mall. Since bella was sad bella came with us. Bella Bringed her slime. I ordered fanta a cheeseburger and fries. Bella ordered chicken nuggets. After that we went to Kmart. I saw panda and fuzz balls and unicorn headphones. I had the panda ones. We were there to buy a outlite. I saw 2 sound of the speck chicken. After that bella had to go. So we went to paknsave and we forget some stuff to buy. We go to farmers to buy some makeup. The hole mall was about to close in 15 minutes!!. So we got some mcdonalds and ate it all up. Then we reached home. i took a bath then i went to sleep. Well i achelly did not sleep i waited until everyone was asleep. When was everyone was asleep. Then i played on my tablete. I had to mute my volemom. Then i played roblox. I played fashon famous, And more. One time i dilvered a white dress to keysha. I saw my old scooteer there. There were at Dunedin at that time. So we went to hub. We Buyed cookies and loliiepops and more!.

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  1. Greetings Strom my name is Rableen. I noticed your big holiday story. How long did it take you to write that story? I also like that you said that you went to sleepovers and that you saw unicorn head phones. I love how you improved your big story by adding full stops and capital letters Bye storm have a nice day.

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